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Re: Rietveld's sideboard

Post by Fletch » Sun Nov 28, 2010 7:55 pm

Looks better :)
Have you thought of maybe trying Thom Thom's plugin for creating geometry from a greyscale image for the floor/wall? It's a little bit like having displacement for SketchUp.

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Re: Rietveld's sideboard

Post by massimo » Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:02 pm

Yeah, I've tried that one, but I assume it works only with very low resolution maps because I wasn't able to do anything... :?
Have to give it another try. :)

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Re: Rietveld's sideboard

Post by Fletch » Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:06 pm

Exactly, read the thread I link to above very carfully. I think it will be useful, after getting used to the technique.

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Re: Rietveld's sideboard

Post by massimo » Mon Nov 29, 2010 12:39 pm

The same floor and the same wall...( :roll: ) but a different mood. This time were used only the sun & sky portal as lighting (gamma 0.85, exposure 1.7). The first image is raw Twilight output while the second has a bit of post work. :)
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Re: Rietveld's sideboard

Post by alvydas » Mon Nov 29, 2010 12:57 pm

like your style. unusual in the Italian design. it must be acknowledged, Italy is famous for its furniture designers
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Re: Rietveld's sideboard

Post by JeZ » Mon Nov 29, 2010 2:56 pm

This is not italian design ;) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gerrit_Rietveld

I like the mood a lot!

Cheers.

Jerome

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Re: Rietveld's sideboard

Post by alvydas » Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:08 pm

I'm sorry :wall: , I thought Massimo from Italy, I confused it

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Re: Rietveld's sideboard

Post by massimo » Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:09 pm

Thanks to both. :D
@ Alvydas I'm not a designer (I'm an architect, a teacher, a town planner and a former photographer of architecture) and I do these renders mostly for fun using objects that I like. :)
@ Indeed Jerome as I wrote in the subject. ;)

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Re: Rietveld's sideboard

Post by Fletch » Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:26 pm

for the casual render hobbyist I would say it's a great image... but for you, my respected friend, I would say that the wood seems lifeless on the sideboard furniture. It may be fun to experiment with the saturation in the high-key image of just the apples, to draw the eye across the image more strongly. And it would be nice to see it higher res, but the floor is still a tiny bit :!

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Re: Rietveld's sideboard

Post by massimo » Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:44 pm

Your crits are totally spot on! Thanks Fletch. :)

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