Second Trial, need your comments
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Second Trial, need your comments
Hi All,
Glad to be in this forum with you, frankly I have no specific project to do and this is a trial of daylight rendering. Please comment.
Glad to be in this forum with you, frankly I have no specific project to do and this is a trial of daylight rendering. Please comment.
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Re: Second Trial, need your comments
At a first glance, need more furniture/floor contrast, bad perspective with background image, the rest I leave to the experts.
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Thanks for passing by, I will try to do something about it
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As a 'test' model it is a scene where all kind of things happening at the same time.
Not easy when you try to make it better to fully understand the impact of the change you made.
Modelwise what stands out for me is that the horizon of the backdrop doesn't compare to the perspective of the scene.
greetings,
erikB
Not easy when you try to make it better to fully understand the impact of the change you made.
Modelwise what stands out for me is that the horizon of the backdrop doesn't compare to the perspective of the scene.
greetings,
erikB
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Re: Second Trial, need your comments
Thanks a lot for your valis comment, I would rather work on a small space with less materials to have a bit of control
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Yes Ramy its your image.....I think it is the best in the image.....saba7 el fol
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It is a very good start.
It seems over-exposed, so that the sunlight on the carpet is too white, and on the chairs on the left. You may need to lighten the color of your floor material if the floor is too dark.
Light through a window...
It seems over-exposed, so that the sunlight on the carpet is too white, and on the chairs on the left. You may need to lighten the color of your floor material if the floor is too dark.
Light through a window...
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Re: Second Trial, need your comments
Hi Fletch
Thanks a lot for the ecourgement and the advise I will post a new rendering soon and need your comments.
Thanks a lot for the ecourgement and the advise I will post a new rendering soon and need your comments.
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