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thexcadguy
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Comments Appreciated

Post by thexcadguy » Mon Oct 06, 2014 6:27 pm

I always like looking at other peoples work so I'm posting some of my stuff and hoping for feedback. Many people here post really beautiful hyper-realistic renders but that's not really my intent (i.e. I know the brick/wood corners are too sharp, etc) At some point I hope to get that good but right now I'm trying to just make visually compelling renders (I spend more time trying to think of cool designs than I do about reflections, bump and DOF but I am trying and am always open to suggestions!) Post pro was line overlay and level adjustments. Most materials are Arroway with bump and refl channels on (except the brick, need a better brick with bump, etc).
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Fletch
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Re: Comments Appreciated

Post by Fletch » Mon Oct 06, 2014 7:39 pm

These renderings are precisely what we created Twilight for. :clap: To quickly show an architectural client a design idea in a compelling way.

Some tips for images:
1: left and right side seem blank, perhaps some tree leaves to blur the edge a bit.
sky with clouds is nice, but the grey clouds are giving a bit depressing feeling.
brick, metal, glass look great!
the asphalt is too dark/perfect. the sidewalk is a bit too mottled.
forground flowers need much improvement. You need some good entourage pics in your arsenal for foreground garden elements... or good SU plants.

2: big "like"

3: overlay part is maybe a bit heavy, overall colors seem a bit oversaturated a bit dark, not much, but just a bit. still a successful image.

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Re: Comments Appreciated

Post by leedeetee » Wed Oct 08, 2014 8:26 pm

Absolutely love these, bravo!
The above is probably a stupid question. Thank-you for your patience.

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Re: Comments Appreciated

Post by alvydas » Wed Oct 08, 2014 8:47 pm

:rspkt:

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Re: Comments Appreciated

Post by TSolt » Fri Oct 10, 2014 3:48 pm

Very nice render and design! :rspkt: I'm curious how it would look with a different color brick or stone exterior.

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