Test renders of new trees...Update 01-26

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Test renders of new trees...Update 01-26

Post by tomsdesk » Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:49 pm

...thought they came out pretty good (except for those baby blue shutters :`) C&C please...?
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Re: Test renders of new trees...

Post by Chris » Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:11 pm

I like the blue!

I think these are great! The only part I have criticism for is the walkway / path texture seems strange (though it's hard to say since it's at a sharp view angle).

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Re: Test renders of new trees...

Post by Frederik » Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:17 pm

Looks GREAT, Tom...!! :gj:
I really enjoy these trees...! ;)
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Re: Test renders of new trees...

Post by rangerrick » Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:28 pm

Yes, Tom, these are lovely. The first image especially :gj:

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Re: Test renders of new trees...

Post by red_shift » Mon Jan 04, 2010 6:53 pm

I prefer the first,simply because it is warmer. I am a little bothered by the one sharp limb on the left that appears to stab toward the house. Maybe rotating that tree would help. I know you are primarily looking at the tree renders, but there is too sharp a border between the background image and the model. Additional trees are needed at the back of the house perhaps. I agree about the walkway. It is raised a bit above the terrain and has a very sharp edge that needs to be roughened up.

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Re: Test renders of new trees...

Post by d12dozr » Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:27 pm

Those trees are AWESOME, Tom! The only thing I noticed was the bark on upper branches of the closest tree (on the left of the first image) is vertical - not aligned with the branch. Of course that would only be a problem for close-ups...Cheers!
-Marcus

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Re: Test renders of new trees...

Post by olishea » Wed Jan 06, 2010 10:14 am

i want these trees! may i request a silver birch? your trees seem very mature, would be nice to have a skinnier young one too.

great work mate, when is the expected release of these?
Oli

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Re: Test renders of new trees...

Post by tomsdesk » Sun Jan 10, 2010 4:46 pm

Thanks a bunch, Guys...really good to hear! I took several of your suggestions to heart (sorry it took me so long to get back to you: got some contract work, finally!, so a guaranteed paycheck's gotta come first :`) and hope you approve.

dozr...when building them, I didn't expect these trees to work so well in the near foreground, but now I see I must rework many of the lower branches and add some lobes to most of the trunks so they can be used to their full potential. I also do intend to do a good job mapping the bark texture correctly...I am surprised and pleased at how well it works at different scales and especially how nicely it takes a deep bump BTW, since I made it from an internet photo.

oli...still shooting for an end of the month release of the oaks (though Valentine's Day is probably more realistic :`) which will include a couple more mature and 8 or so smaller and immature. Birch types (ovoid leaves) will be a later set...either next or after maples.
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Re: Test renders of new trees...Update 01-10

Post by Frederik » Sun Jan 10, 2010 6:59 pm

I'm blown away... :shock: :gj:
Keep it up...! :D
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Re: Test renders of new trees...Update 01-10

Post by Stu » Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:39 pm

Hi Tom, lovely images and those trees look great......just a question though, about the scale of the trees [or is the leaves?]

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